Spartan-777
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The Violent Cartographer.
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Post by Spartan-777 on Oct 17, 2009 19:44:24 GMT -5
I'm posting what I can remember of the storyline here. I'll try to fill in gaps later. If anyone has any sugestions, feel free to post them here.
Let's see... there's something the Heretics have found floating in the atmosphere of Threshold, but I forgot what it was. The Covenant were searching for relics, and came to Threshold
They found the Heretics, and have been trying to remove them
And the Humans sent a recon team to find out what's going on, forgot what happens next, and the Heretics end up allying with the Humans
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Post by IndigoWolf on Oct 17, 2009 19:56:04 GMT -5
Sounds like you still have most of it, so this won't be too hard. Maybe the artifact could be a computer with some sort of important information. Maybe blueprints for some Forerunner weapons or armor. I'll try to think of more.
Edit: Oh yeah, I have one question: where is most of this taking place? On a nearby planet, or the wreckage of Installation 04, or something like the mining facility, or something else?
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Spartan-777
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Post by Spartan-777 on Oct 17, 2009 20:24:01 GMT -5
For the Humans, it takes place on a secret Planet that is relatively close to Threshold, called Downflow. For the Covenant, it is in orbit of Threshold and the upper atmosphere, as well as the floating Heretic camps constructed there.
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Post by IndigoWolf on Oct 17, 2009 20:30:37 GMT -5
Alright, that helps. It would be easier to keep track of everyone if were in the same area. So maybe, after a few pages the Heretics could retreat to the planet you mentioned and the Covenant follows them there. Then there is brief 3-way battle until the Heretic and humans call a truce and team up against the Covenant.
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Spartan-777
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Post by Spartan-777 on Oct 17, 2009 20:39:00 GMT -5
********** *Approved!* **********
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Post by IndigoWolf on Oct 17, 2009 20:47:11 GMT -5
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Ares
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Post by Ares on Oct 18, 2009 20:17:39 GMT -5
YAYZ! Me likey...
as for the artifact, I think it should be a complex computer A.I. that's been corrupted over the centuries, so it's now agressive and wants to extinguish all life that interferes with it..
And for the battlefields, I like Zarra's idea- but I thought for the Covenant battle plan, as Zaku's the commanding officer for the Covenant in this case, would be that the two Field Masters lead their teams to the small camps, they fight, and then move to the facility with the Artifact. After the battle, some Elites from the Covenant become heretics, and they retreat to the hidden planet... Battle ensues, yadayadayade...
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Post by Spec-Opp Spartan on Oct 18, 2009 21:00:14 GMT -5
man that would of been better then the Forerunner fallout shelter we will find in The Artifact0..a Forerunner AI who has spent too much time studying the flood and decides that all life must be eliminated to ensure the safety of the universe.
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